rebel planet

  the year is 2453. Colonization and space travel for the human race began in 2070 6.8 light years away from earth.
they have made different technologies to help them adapt and travel to different planets. humans so far that i have read are on to planets earth and Radix, Radix is a little more lazier then earth because its more fertile planet.

very few planets are habitable for humans so they have made these things called Halmuris they are kind of homes for scientist and researches while they wait to find another goldilocks planet. they find a earth like planet with clouds they scientist and researchers are really happy and all that and soon travel over to the planet not know that the planet is inhibited already by a alien race. the humans have called the planet Arcadion and the aliens are called the acadions. not knowing that they are and evil race and want power and control over other life forms and planets, the humans in the Halmuris travel to the planet and lost the ships and the Arcadions use the technology which they don't have to be able to travel.

now the arcadians have beenn in war with the humans, it has lasted 150 years the humans have lost also have been made into slaves to obey and serve the Arcadtions.

you have been given the history of the story and now they move on to you and your part in the plot. you get given your mission to travel to each planet to the rebels get the digits to crack the binary code to destroy the made queen computer to stop the aliens.

my thought:

 the history I think is very laid out you know what's going on where every thing is who's who and most of all what's it about. i like the story concept and hopefully when I start playing I'll enjoy it even more.

now getting in the game.


roll dice Add 6 to the numer for you skill: 6- 6 12  skill for fighting.

stamina roll 2 dice add 12: 6/12 18


luck roll 1 dice add 6: 6/12

record your opponents skill and stamina also


creature skill. attack score 6

mine 19 his is 6

creature 4

15 10

creature 2

creatures 0

you can force more damage by using you luck bar


now repeat round but this time attack his stamina

his 6 mine is 18


his 4 mine 18

his 2 mine 18

his 0 mine 10

another fight mode sudden death if you get a 1-5 on your dice you hit the Arcadains presser point  but if you get a 6 you miss it.

the fighting works so far you have to have write down what your  doing on other wise you will get lost and confused.
the fight i was in i get did the steps I was told I think it would be great if when you hit them something happens so for example when you attack the creature falls over or goes faring in the air smashed through a wall things like that try and put my self there. maybe they do further along in the game.

text adventures

 I start to play the hitch-hikers guide to the Galaxy. first playing it i was quite confused in how to play. But then i got the hang of it and slowly got in to it.
i find it was quite difficult not knowing what do next you have to try and look for the key word hidden in the sentience or the object and is hidden in the image, also you had to type in curtain words to be correct.

when i been playing the game i type something and it say its wrong even though i have tried different words it still doesn't work.
when it comes to other games they give you hints on they way to go buy using light, moment you have a map and such but on text adventure games you don't have that which makes it annoying. its really fun when you get something right and progress in the game and the way that iv been doing this on the hitch hikers guide to the galaxy is by remembering the film.      

comady 7 ploy piont

Comedy

Defining the Comedy story archetype is problematic as in modern times the term has come to mean simply anything that is funny. Therefore stories constructed from the other basic plot types have been mistakenly termed comedies.

Aristotle described comedy as showing people to be worse than they are and tragedy as showing people to be greater than they are. In the classic definition of Comedyplots the characters are thrown into a state of confusion, darkness and bewilderment where resolution can only come when these constricting factors have been played out to their extremes.

Comedy examples are All’s Well That Ends Well, When Harry Met Sally, Some Like It Hot.

this is the end with the of James Franco and, Jonah Hill, Seth Rogen, Jay Baruchal, Danny McBride and Craig Robinson 

this film is really interesting because the cast play them selfs as actors acting in a plot where the apocalypse is going on a completely unreal scenario, which is confusing, has darkness and bewilderment  which is funny on its own.

Create a short narrative of choice

Create a short narrative of choice

Character based narrative

• In the slums of the City, the Mob has got complete power over the day to day life of the people. Everyone needs to pay "protection tax" in order to be able to have a normal life

scene setting

• Zen, our hero, is a poor gypsy boy trying to create a better life for himself and everyone else around him. He lives in the slums of the City with his tribal family, in extreme poverty. He starts off as a pickpocket in order to help his family, in a Robin Hood style - He steals from the mobs and gives to his people in order to be able to make ends meet.

Zen - the hero

• One day he pickpockets the wrong person, he is the best in this trade at stealing and killing ( similar to "The Wolf" from Pulp Fiction)
• If Zen wants to save his family, he needs to create an alliance with The Wolf

The Wolf

• However his  family gets killed and he starts plotting his revenge

.... 4 years go by

• He is now trying to take over the mob.
• In this process, he is slowly drawn into the criminal life and gets corrupted. He has nothing else to live for, and it is very easy for The Wolf to see his vulnerability and turn him into a heartless criminal. The wolf gives him a sword

• While before he was restricting his activity to just scare tactics, he now starts hurting people and is on a fast track to killing as well
• The Wolf has his own plan to overturn The Boss and become the boss himself with Zen's help
• Zen agrees to help The Wolf for the selfish reason that he wants to become The Boss himself
• The Boss is a woman and Zen, knows that if he finds her weak points, he will be able to influence her
• The Boss is asking Zen to spy on the Wolf as she suspects something 
• The Wolf gets closer to Zen and considers him a friend and starts confessing some his plans
• Zen uses this friendship against him and is playing the Wolf and the Boss against each other
• Zen gets the Wolf and The Boss to have a confrontation in which they start fighting and while they are both half dead, they realise that this is all Zen's doing, and at this exact point, Zen finishes them both off and he becomes The Boss
• Zen is now The Boss, and normality is restored - people of the slums still have to pay their dues to the mob, but now the mob is represented by one of their own

As a player you will be able to play as The Wolf or Zen.

Depending on the character, you will follow different paths of action and have different quests

You can switch between characters mid play.

the hero's journey

you start with the departure.



the ordinary world where the hero has his normal life where he isnt apart of the journey and hasn't joined  the departure of the story.
then moves on to the call of adventure so in starwars its the part where the hologram of Lya goes "help me obi one you are my only hope". some times in a u can get a no to the call, but something will always to change the hero's mind.

supernatural aid talisman.
usally a thing but it can be a person.

closing to the threshold/entering the unknown. the unknown where the hero is at first place of his journey where hes far from home on his own and in a uncomfortable area. you can get threshold guardians where you get the enemy guards and a bad vibe.

allies/heros
the main cast. belly of the whale "i have a very bad feeling about this.

meting the goddess

read of trials
could be a personal battle doesn't have to be a person.

Temptation from the path
so when Darth Vader temps Luke to join the darkside of the force
atonement with the father

apotheosis
he has done it/ im a jedi likmy father before me

ultimate boom

the goal of the film being complete

return

the magic flight/ rescue from without

han solo come and helps luke to destroy the deth star

master of the two worlds